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Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the latest draft of the Pilot script (left) to view.
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When an alien lifeform unleashes a holocaust on humanity, a Navy diver leads the survivors in a fightback against an ever-evolving, ever more frightening version of us, ‘The Sentient.’
A Navy Diver wakes in a recompression chamber to discover Sydney engulfed in a terrifying red storm and the inhabitants of the city vanished.
Inspired by the Sydney 2009 red dust storm.
Sydney Harbour and HMAS Penguin.
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