The Pilot is the show’s calling card.
Fine-tuning is critical to ensure every relationship and conflict is properly set up for the rest of the season.
I have created five different Teaser Acts for this Pilot now. Each of them explored how we would immediately engage the audience in the story of the protagonist and their dilemma. Does this version nail it? Have your say. Submit a review.
Theme and relevance
The article covers how your script should mirror current events and social relevance.
Sentient’s theme is leadership. Leadership in a time of crisis. Sentient explores this theme at a time when it is exceedingly relevant to all of us.
Draft Four of Sentient – Australia – A 50 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the latest draft of the Pilot script to view.
View the act by act reveals.
View the major changes.
View the older draft, Draft Three.
Begin your review
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1. Rate the work using the 1-5 star system at the top of the post under the title.
2. Write and submit a one to five-page review as a writer/reviewer or a specialist advisor and email it to the HOD.
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Deadline April 31st 2020
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