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Poppy Kathopoulis – Film and Theatre Production | Actor awarded 10 Hero points to David Steinhoff – Head of Development 3 days, 15 hours ago
The reason given for this award was: For being a sentient being 🙂
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 4 days, 1 hour ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewRe Joe’s review, HMAS Penguin is actually called HMAS Penguin.
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development posted an update 4 days, 3 hours ago
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 4 days, 3 hours ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewTest
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development posted an update 1 week, 3 days ago
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development posted an update 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development's profile was updated 3 weeks, 2 days ago
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 3 weeks, 6 days ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewSome common review points:
1. Readers are not comfortable with Dowd calling out for help.
2. Readers like the Commodore as a woman and when I proposed she be Dowd’s ex wife, liked that a lot more.
3. The issue with the Chinese must be provoked by an act by the US President and a mine blowing up a Chinese ship which the US denies. The mining of…[Read more] -
David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewYou know what Keith, I just wrote a draft where it is clear that the Commodore is Dowd’s ex, (well technically they are still married) and it reads much better. Excellent advice and now applied.
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewYou could write a book about the death of democracy.
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewResponse to Keith Melton’s review.
Firstly, thanks so much Keith.
Re MORE HUMOUR – This kind of work needs gravity, a weight to them to maintain the tone. it’s a serious situation. There is humour but just not too much.
Re MISSING dialogue, page 31 – Nice spot. Grammar error. Shall fix now.
Re making sense of the dialogue Page 31 – ‘What…[Read more] -
David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewTwo comments have come to me regards the Commodore stating she is red hot to go after Dowd but readers cannot see why. I am tracking this to see if we have a problem.
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewYou’re welcome
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David Steinhoff – Head of Development commented on the post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three 1 month ago
In reply to: David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Three Begin your review Draft Three of Sentient – Australia – A 42 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the […] ViewHi Naomi,
Thanks so much for taking the time.
I really appreciate your comment.
Re female actors over 50, that’s where the talent is.
How many 18 year-olds can carry a serious role?
You’re also really going to like Senator Connie Vickers. She is your kind of mover and shaker gal.
And Rebecca Kaye, the daughter of a mining magnate who now runs…[Read more] -
David Steinhoff – Head of Development awarded 47200 Hero points to David Steinhoff – Head of Development 1 month ago
The reason given for this award was: 11800 x 4 bonus for personal sponsorship 9/1/19 – 30/10/19
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