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When her psychopathic father goes on a killing spree, Marley Winser, a failed officer cadet from Sandhurst, fights her way to the cellar, saving sister Dillion and herself from certain death.
When they wake in the morning, Marley and Dillion exit the cellar to discover the house wrecked by a mysterious storm and most of her family now dead or missing.
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