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    David Steinhoff – Head of Development posted an update 4 days, 18 hours ago

    Just published – Sentient Australia Draft Two

    Sentient Australia Review – Draft Two

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    David Steinhoff – Head of Development wrote a new post, Sentient Australia Review – Draft Two 6 days, 16 hours ago

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    Draft Two of Sentient – Australia – The 65 page Pilot script, is ready for review. Click on the latest draft of the Pilot script (left) to view.

    Read the summary document here.

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      Naomi Lisner - Actor/Writer/Producer replied 6 days, 4 hours ago

      Love it- Naomi

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        David Steinhoff - Head of Development replied 6 days, 4 hours ago

        Thanks so much Naomi

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      David Nerlich replied 2 days, 18 hours ago

      Initial thoughts. I think you’ve set youself all the right tasks here and solved all the problems of the previous draft that I saw. I only found the to and fro action in the lab with more characters emerging a little hard to follow but referring to the summary as I went might have helped there.

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        David Steinhoff - Head of Development replied 2 days, 18 hours ago

        Hi David,
        Thanks so much for taking the time to read the work.
        Yes, I took into account the critique from prior reviews.

        Shall take a look at the lab again.
        ;o)

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