By Nikita Ivanenko and Daniel Garcia
*Revisions by Amanda Asquith
*Episode one is the first in a series set in Russia by the authors
Location: Moscow nightclub
Synopsis: YURI finally gets his chance to score with the hottest girl on the dance floor, ‘DASHA’. Unfortunately for YURI, the object of his desire is entertaining a dangerous guest.
Tag: One hell of a party
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